Saturday, October 1, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday.

Welcome. This snippet is a continuation from last week's 6 - Julie has just spotted her former lover on a beach.

Julie's body said run, but her feet refused to move as she watched a long-legged, svelte, golden blonde rise from the beach chair. Robert's voice floated across the sand. It was a calming sound, which had brought a smile to her face when he whispered words of love and passion in her ear.
She remembered the way his dark eyes smoldered with anger and his sly, innocent grin. His joyous laughter had made her feel the abandonment of a child frolicking in the year's first snowfall. She stepped backward onto the path, distancing herself from the lovers as the blonde undid the strings on her bathing suit top, and let it fall to the sand.

CIRCLES INTERLOCKED - Having been betrayed by the man she assumed she was destined to be with forever; Julie Anderson slapped Robert Holiday in an angry ending to their brief romance. Heartbroken that her love affair didn't end with the fairy tale ending Happily Ever After, Julie leaves town to pursue her dream of being a dancer. As fate has a curious sense of humor, eight years later, they wake up in bed together. Now it is up to love to fix what time cannot mend.

7 comments:

  1. Beautifully written and intense Six..looking forward to next week :)

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  2. Thank you Christine for such kind words.
    Won't be here next week - Canadian Thanksgiving -- sorry to make you wait until the 16th.

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  3. Thanks Daryl D

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  4. Great six. I can so feel her anguish at seeing her replacement. Liked yor blurb too. Sounds like a good read.

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  5. This is the first time I've read your six. I've been doing this for a couple weeks and now getting to read everyone's. These were great and can't wait to read more.

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  6. Thanks for stopping by Jenna and Cynthia.

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